Tuesday, January 4, 2011

                                                                     Enter Apathy
Enter Apathy
A fear you'll become some one not known or never shown
Enter a world of destruction and abomination
A life new to the ways of the past, But it won't last.
Drag yourself through hell and pain
Enter a world of fear and terror
Don't look back or loose your way
Enter Apathy
Exit here


The blurb of my book reads ; Enter Apathy, The title Exit Here.\

     The contradiction is so debatable which makes it a great topic for a poem. The idea is making you think and not letting you drag your brain across a sponge seeing that it is capable of absorbing information but not. It wants you to feel what it is saying. Because it is a sentence that has so much to offer. It gives you freedom to imagine what you think it means and it gives you direction of what you should be thinking. It's structured but limp, Strong but weak. But yet you can write an entire poem about these 4 words. Each one feeds into the other giving you ideas and imagery and a flow of pictures that race through your head, a million different possible things it could mean. But you chose one, this is the one i chose. What these four words meant to me. A story in and of itself but open ended for you to figure out.

1 comment:

  1. i will post more Ms.Galang but i'm trying to think of what i will do next!!!

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